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Video Draft

  • Writer: Kelly Quach
    Kelly Quach
  • May 25, 2022
  • 1 min read

Updated: Jun 2, 2022

Hello! I'm still working on the report, but here is a rough draft of my video so far! It is supposed to be a short, but interesting video montage of my trip to Scotland.


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Maya Gudino-Girth
Maya Gudino-Girth
May 26, 2022

First of all, I loved the video so far!

  1. I would imagine that your audience included those in a similar age group as ourselves, in college or fresh out of college. People who may not travel a lot or who are looking for a new place to explore.

  2. - One suggestion I have is to maybe add in some clips of some other activities that are a bit more engaging for a young audience. Ideas may be something like hiking or shopping that appeals to your audiences age group. If you did go shopping and have clips of the type of clothing you bought that would obviously be for a younger age group.

  3. - Another suggestion may be, if possible,…

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